Ok, here's the revised version of the sleigh swap promotional piece. I'm not as happy with it as the first initial (is there irony in writing "second initial"?). The first was too complicated for the client, though, so thems the breaks. Hopefully this one will be approved. Otherwise, the piece will have to be completely redrawn. The condition of the bristol is, at this point, less than ideal. Erasing, while picking up most of the actual graphite, leaves the gouges created by the pencils. And, truth be told, I'm a bit of a perfectionist.